improvements

When looking at my front cover for my magazine I discussed what I could do to make improvements. Some of the things that I will make a change to in my next magazine would be to make sure my images of people are not floating.  This will make it look more professional. I also need to make sure that I give my models more direction so they know exactly what they are doing and don’t look awkward. The speech bubble that I have included on my magazine doesn’t look right as the text is set to the left rather than the center so it looks unorganized.  I also included a picture of a survival guide to go with the title of the magazine. However the picture was a little bit too far to the left of the page so one of the corners had been cut off slightly.. I also realized that it was difficult to tell which of the stories the main one was. This is because a lot of my pictures and text were similar size so it was difficult to pick out the biggest one that was intended to be the main story.  My masthead ‘Guide to CBA’ also needs to be made bigger as it wasn’t very clear. It is also important that I put more space between the text and the other image as when you just look at it you can’t tell which image the text is related to.

 

When making my contents page I need to expand the picture to fill the whole page as well as cropping it to get rid of any unwanted image that may draw attention away from the main image. I also need to make sure that all my fonts are the same and the same size to make it look more organized.